People today do not feel safe either at home or when they are out. What are the causes? What are the solutions?
Nowadays, many people do not feel safe when they go out or even when they stay at home. This is mainly because of the rising of crimes and dangers on the roads. There are a number of solutions which should be implemented to deal with the issue of increasing scared in people.
Firstly, the reason why people now have to face serious risks no matter where they are is due to the rising of crimes in their areas. In other words, more and more criminals are being released from prison or have not been caught, such as murders, robberies, which would make people feel afraid of stepping out of their homes or even within their homes. The second reason responsible for the problem of increasing scared in people is that these days have more dangers on the roads, especially the traffic accidents nowadays. Most accidents are caused by illegal traffic offenses The cause behind this is that people who are over-speeding or drunk-driving may not control their driving and cause accidents to participants.
There are two effective solutions to the problem of increasing scared in many people today. One way to tackle this is that government should resolve the unemployment, therefore offenders can find stable jobs, which will hopefully reduce the crime rate. Another method of dealing with this issue is using public transport instead of private vehicles. The government had better install surveillance cameras and enable the police to enforce safety on the road. By doing this, it will help people may feel more secure when they are.
In conclusion, resolving the unemployment problems, using more public transports and improving security are effective in dealing with these issues. If these approaches are carried out, it may give people a high quality of life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 616, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...es The cause behind this is that people who are over-speeding or drunk-driving may not ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, so, therefore, in conclusion, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1472.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00680272109 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54059547893 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568027210884 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.76091372 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.142857143 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251529200247 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0858378733838 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116602050676 0.0667982634062 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156464644254 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0966857503345 0.056905535591 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.