People today do not feel safe either at home or when they are out. What are the causes? What are the solutions?
Individuals today are suffering from high levels of anxiety no matter where they are. The essay discusses possible reasons for this and steps that can definitely be taken to tackle the problem.
There are some reasons why people feel unsafe regardless of their location. The first reason is that the crime rate is rapidly increasing. Therefore, it makes people anxious about their safety when staying at home. They fear that thieves can break into their house, steal their property and pose a risk to their life. Another reason is that due to the growth of transportation, the number of traffic accidents is rising. As a result, people tend to hesitate to go out to avoid dangers. For example, in Vietnam, due to the high rate of traffic accidents, people prefer staying at home rather than going out.
Some simple measures can be implemented to tackle the root causes of the problem. The first solution is that governments can install more security cameras in residential areas to prevent criminals from breaking into people’s houses. As a result, this can help people feel safer at home. Another solution is that residents should be encouraged to use public transport, thereby reducing a great number of private vehicles which is perceived to be the main cause of road accidents. In the long term, imposing stricter punishments for driving offenses should be implemented in order to improve road safety and ease people’s fear when going out.
In conclusion, the increasing crime rate and the traffic accidents are two main reasons making residents anxious regardless of their location. Installing more surveillance cameras in residential areas, encouraging residents to use public transport, and imposing harsher penalties for road safety violations can be done to ease people’s nervousness.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, therefore, as to, for example, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1521.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24482758621 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71889718498 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531034482759 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6627840123 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0625 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.125 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187322959291 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0664889639718 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596340366775 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101330619086 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0666957820002 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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