Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment. What can governments do to address these problems? What can individual people do?
It is undeniable that our environment has become an alarming issue on daily basis.Therefore, governments and individual must take responsible for preventing the increasing menances and taking actions to protect our planet.This essay will discuss how human damage our environment pertain to solutions from them.
The initial reason mainly boils down to the urbanisation and industrialization. People seemingly intend to flock to cities rather than living in the countryside for the benefits of accomodation, education, entertainment, job opportunities, etc. Thenceforth, the inhabitants face up with the air pollution from vehicles and smoke from factories. Morever, unflagging fuel demands for producing and exporting leads to the natural resources loss. For example, coal diposit in Viet Nam is under hazardous condition because of illegal exploitation.
As some aforementioned reasons above, it is urgent that the governments and individuals think of solutions. Regarding to goverments actions, they can help the environment by number of ways. One of the effective ways is to implement strict laws on factories. If the factories continue to produce more pollution, money punishment should be applied. In addition, public transport campaigns should be highly promoted so as to reduce smokes and fuel consumption from private vehicles. Comfortable, reliable and convenient buses can be the top-notch choices in the populated areas.
Apart from goverments, personal responsibility is indeed important. People can improve the condition by changing their daily habit. Take 3R's as an example, individuals should reduce the consumption of electricity, reuse the plastic bottles for planting flowers, and donate those to recycle centre to produce by-products. What's more, people should use more public transportation and if possible, walk more. That way, pollution that comes from vehicles can be minimised.
In conclusion, people are damaging the environment because of the fuel needs and population boom. Governments can solve this problem by imposing strict rules and enhancing public transportation. At the same time, individuals should apply three R's rules and increase the habit of taking buses and walking.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, regarding, so, then, therefore, apart from, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1895.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.79510703364 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23820144835 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626911314985 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 576.9 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.5226080079 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.75 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.35 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202147776272 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0540584452457 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513957032446 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106873111989 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514435828803 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.06 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.93 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.