Many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment , why is this happening and what are the measures
These days, the amount of crime rate has increased drastically. what we can say by this is that, everyday we hear about some crime or the other in newspapers, social media handles, and on television etc. This essay will propose as to why many people recommit there mistakes even after serving the first sentence in jail and how to avoid crimes from repeating.
Firstly, we can say that crimes are repeated for the simple fact that life in jail is much more better. What i mean by this is that staying in jail has several advantages. For example, some prison's have television sets and several entertainment facilities.
Secondly, crime rate has increased due to the simple fact that, many petty criminal's are put up in cells with a person who has committed a greater crime. For instance, a Shopkeeper who has been sentanced to prison on the charges of cheating is put in a cell with a Murderer. Hence, he might get influenced by this and may end up repeating the crime or can commit even bigger crimes.
Moving to the other side, crimes can be avoided only if certain measures are taken. what i mean to say by this is that, criminals of the same crime should be put together. Instead of putting them with people who committed a bigger crime.
Another way, we can avoid people from committing crimes is by, not giving them luxuries in jails and give them severe task's or punishment's so that they realise there mistakes .
To conclude, we can say that the main reason's for increasing crime rate is basically, benefits in staying in jail and getting influenced by other individuals during there sentence. These can only be avoided if jails are much stern and if people of bigger crimes are kept away.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, as to, for example, for instance, i mean
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1417.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72333333333 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46895940275 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516666666667 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5766768916 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.4666666667 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26666666667 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258646400342 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.08872640566 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063373491453 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132252690153 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0687757434747 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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