Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In recent years, a debate about the responsibility of individuals, governments and large companies in improving the environment has been receiving a great deal of media attention. Although, the government and large companies need to solve the world's problems, taking care of the environment still need to be taken by everyone.
Each policies, campaigns, measures of the government or large companies only works if everyone take action. First, the authorities and large companies can not control the behaviors of each individuals in personally. For example, they can gives laws related to protecting the environment at school, work but not at home, that leads to some household still wasting energy, water and littering around their home. Moreover, the government or companies are still a group of people, nothing will make a difference if one small group change. The environment is damaging by tons of people, so it can not be fixed by efforts of one certain group.
Improving the environment is easy if every individuals gives attention. It is simple for each person to change their way of living to save other creatures. For instance, they can go vegan to save animals, recycle paper for saving trees, use less energy or commuting by public or eco-friendly transportation. Furthermore, the environment affects our life significantly. Improve it means improve our life qualities so that individuals are the one who have the responsibility to improve and protect their own life. If environmental damaging keep on going, not only human but also other creatures which share the same environment would pay a heavy price.
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- Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment only governments and large companies can make a difference To what extent do you agree or disagree Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience 73
- Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment only governments and large companies can make a difference To what extent do you agree or disagree Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 239, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'give'
Suggestion: give
...ls in personally. For example, they can gives laws related to protecting the environm...
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Line 5, column 544, Rule ID: ON_GOING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'ongoing'?
Suggestion: ongoing
...wn life. If environmental damaging keep on going, not only human but also other creature...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, still, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1364.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24615384615 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04828984939 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580769230769 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3914746453 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.923076923 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23076923077 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251032772356 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0871267392003 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0376691749752 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160264716226 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0330706243018 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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