Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
Contemporarily, our Earth is experiencing dreadful damages and pollutions. It is argued by many people that only authorities and successful companies are able to make something different to improve the environment. While I agree that they provide a majority of improvement, I also believe that individual contribution is essential.
On the one hand, lots of individuals argued that authorities are responsible to protect the surrounding. This is because they believe that authorities have the power to make a law that decreases the damage to the environment. To exemplify, there are some vital laws restricting people from deforestation, and the authorities regularly inspect factories to prevent them from causing excessive air and water pollution. In addition, they believe that successful corporations can protect the environment by investing in some products that are environmental-friendly or funding some services in planting.
On the other hand, others, including me, opine that individual contribution is an important factor for better improvement in the environment. This can create greater involvement and seriousness towards the environment. For example, if all people throw rubbish into the trash can, they are helping the Earth no longer face pollution. According to reports, the number of wild animals is declining due to undissolved rubbish found in their stomachs. Therefore, individual contribution is essential in protecting the Earth because a small matter can have a big impact.
In conclusion, although governments and companies help to decrease the pollutions on the Earth by making the laws and producing environmental-friendly products, it is essential for individual contributions as well to improve the environment. It is everyone's responsibility to pay attention to the Earth where they live in.
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- Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment only governments and large companies can make a difference To what extent do you agree or disagree Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience 56
- Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment only governments and large companies can make a difference To what extent do you agree or disagree Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1559.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.71062271062 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.58398281873 2.80592935109 128% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556776556777 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.578817135 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.357142857 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21428571429 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152992610427 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0522835674617 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393730663944 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0980612324101 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.020624724406 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.84 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.