Some people say that marriages should be arranged by intermediaries. Others say that young people should be free to choose their marriage partners.
Which viewpoint do you agree with?
Since ancient times, marriage has been one of the most vital institutions in human society. The issue of debate is whether spouses are paired together hinged on romantic love or arrangement. In my opinion, marriage with the involvement of parents would bring a multitude of benefits to both partners.
To begin with, arranged marriage would be convenient for both spouses. In the modern world, life is dynamic and changing at an accelerated rate. As a consequence, people are increasingly being pressed for time, strive for the sake of themselves, and have no time to find their better half. For instance, professionals who spend most of their time researching in the laboratory so it is impossible for them to date or get involved in romantic relationships. If those people want to get married, matchmaking will have a crucial role to play.
Furthermore, marriage with the involvement of parents will help both spouses to possibly have a satisfying and fulfilling life. When parents find a spouse for their child, they consistently consider superficial criteria like social, cultural, educational, and financial background. Therefore, the couple tend to have more things to share in common and their marriage is ensured to last longer. Besides, those criteria play an important role in conducting a fulfilling life. To be more specific, in today’s world, prices are rising across the board including all the essentials like clothing, shelter, or food. To adapt to that society, the financial condition would be crucial in pairing two individuals together.
To sum up, arranged marriage would help individuals to save their time and choose the most compatible partners in various criteria. In this fast-paced and challenging world, that kind of marriage is justified and should be encouraged.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, if, so, therefore, for instance, kind of, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1514.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29370629371 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98000574682 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587412587413 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.4143449687 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.625 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.875 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4375 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216869992826 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691087428469 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595734244822 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138869825334 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0610558060672 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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