Some people say that marriages should be arranged by intermediaries. Others say that young people should be free to choose their marriage partners. Which viewpoint do you agree with?
Marriage is indeed a crucial milestone of a lifeline. Although it is a common practice that marriages are decided by parents and matchmakers, I am strongly convinced that marital happiness should be based on an individual's affection and willingness.
To begin with, arranged marriage can eliminate a tremendous amount of stress from finding a prospective partner. These days many young people are overwhelmed with an excessive workload, which leaves them little time for romantic relationships or casual dating. To ensure certainty in selecting a second half, matchmaking can possibly be a time-saving option. Furthermore, arranged marriage provides the opportunity for parents' involvement in the decision-making of their children's unions. In certain countries such as India or Nepal, It has become an unwritten rule to ask for permission from parents and older guardians before a man and a woman tie a knot. The couple will stand a higher chance of getting married when their parents find both families share the same common grounds such as financial background, cultural norms, and ethics.
Critics of the above ideas claim that arranged marriage can not guarantee life-long happiness because it limits the opportunity to find a compatible spouse. Couples who engage in this type of marriage tend to sacrifice genuine personal emotions for the sake of their family’s interest. For this reason, they might not get along well with each other, leading to more dissatisfaction. Without mutual affection, it is difficult for these couples to overcome any inevitable or unexpected challenges in their married lives. This can cause more conflicts and mental damages to the husband or wife, as their marriage is forced and maintained by parents’ obligation.
In conclusion, while there are several beneficial factors to marriages anticipated by third parties, I can confer that the negative consequences of arranged marriage far outweigh its advantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ly be a time-saving option. Furthermore, arranged marriage provides the opportuni...
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...marriage far outweigh its advantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, second, so, third, well, while, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1663.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50662251656 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03339634 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645695364238 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.837442485 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.785714286 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5714285714 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224203910346 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725167194424 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404254223872 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130487826881 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0237171475723 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.17 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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