The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given bar chart illustrate about the proporton of male and female in one Asian country who overtook when they took their driving exam every 10 years from 1980 to 2010.
Overall, the percentage of women who passed the driving test is higher than man all four years and the proportion of male and female had a stable increase in the first three years.
In 1980, the rate of a female passed the exam register nearly 50%, after which this feature climed to over 50% in 1990, and after this years this rate was always above 50%. Moreover, it reachesthe highest point at around 68% in 2000 and this was followed by a slight fall to under 65% in 2010.
The rate of male and female were similar that both had a stable development in the first 3 years, but in the last year, those had a different trend. To be more exact, the percentage of men stand about 38% and 48% in 1980 and 1990, respectively, at which point this rate went up to nearly 49% and remain unchanged in the next 10 years.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...exam every 10 years from 1980 to 2010. Overall, the percentage of women who pas...
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...ble increase in the first three years. In 1980, the rate of a female passed the...
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...e climed to over 50% in 1990, and after this years this rate was always above 50%. M...
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...rate was always above 50%. Moreover, it reachesthe highest point at around 68% in 2000 and this wa...
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...by a slight fall to under 65% in 2010. The rate of male and female were similar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 805.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.35135135135 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15034609136 2.65546596893 81% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583783783784 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 232.2 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 22.3283576547 43.030603864 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 134.166666667 112.824112599 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.8333333333 22.9334400587 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185776814422 0.215688989381 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0924317372468 0.103423049105 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0977375365607 0.0843802449381 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129263592569 0.15604864568 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0997413086197 0.0819641961636 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.41 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.54 11.4140731707 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.4329268293 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.