Working professionals, these days, often work overtime, as a result, they do not get time for family and themselves. Undoubtedly, such a schedule offers merits to business owners and employees, in contrast, it has its demerits. However, there has been a long-standing debate on whether to prioritize jobs over leisure activities. In this essay, both perspectives will be discussed in detail.
To begin with, some people look into the bright side of working for late hours. They think about incentives and appraisals, companies offer them for their additional shifts. Moreover, many business owners tend to work long hours in order to stay with the pace of the competitors. Elon Musk, for example, used to spend 100 hours per week in his Tesla workshop. He had to challenge well-established car brands and create a space for his product. Consequently, these people are accustomed to such a culture and persuade their peers to follow their paths.
Simultaneously, due to their hectic schedule, people can not spend time on sports or other hobbies. Therefore, their body starts developing ailments such as diabetes, high blood pressure, and hypertension. According to a survey in the United States, more than 70 percentages of people working in corporate are having one or more such diseases. Additionally, being physically inactive, their mental stress increases, and they begin behaving inconsiderately in public as well as at home. Henceforth, even if they earn better pay-grade, their physical and mental illness makes them suffer more.
In conclusion, depending upon the life goals, workers and entrepreneurs stick to their jobs. Whether it is business interest or performance awards, losing time for extracurricular activities, always makes them pay for their body. I personally believe that possessing a fine balance between career and physique is vital for human
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, hence, however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1583.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3843537415 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04853188771 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.680272108844 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.4318348795 49.4020404114 41% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.9444444444 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.83333333333 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216499169447 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0582220322918 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570815077829 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115668867087 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313877865125 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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