Some people think that being able to communicate with others online is breaking down the geographical barriers and enabling people who would normally never have the chance to meet to communicate What are the advantages of international communication onlin

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... thanks for the development the internet we can easily communicate especially Int...
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...ly International Communication online. nevertheless besides advantages of this Improvem...
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...onal Communication online. nevertheless besides advantages of this Improvemen...
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...unication online. nevertheless besides advantages of this Improvement, there ...
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...ine. nevertheless besides advantages of this Improvement, there some disadv...
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...sides advantages of this Improvement, there some disadvantage too on the fi...
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... advantages of this Improvement, there some disadvantage too on the first han...
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...t hand there is a fact that many people cant live with their family, friends, acqu...
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...many people cant live with their family, friends, acquaintances. so, they use ...
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...e cant live with their family, friends, acquaintances. so, they use online co...
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...heir family, friends, acquaintances. so, they use online communication as a m...
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...r family, friends, acquaintances. so, they use online communication as a mean...
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... friends, acquaintances. so, they use online communication as a mean to shrink...
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...an to shrink the gap of them and others, maintain the sentiment with relatives ...
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...hem and others, maintain the sentiment with relatives and friends. Secondly...
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...d others, maintain the sentiment with relatives and friends. Secondly, ther...
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... maintain the sentiment with relatives and friends. Secondly, there many time...
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...there many times, you just find a person hitting it up with you in the internet. ...
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...itting it up with you in the internet. they can have hobbies or Passions in common ...
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...obbies or Passions in common with you. then you can have friends to Share anything...
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... with you. then you can have friends to Share anything you like and relax after...
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... you can have friends to Share anything you like and relax after stress working ...
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...u like and relax after stress working or learning thirdly, online communicati...
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...elax after stress working or learning thirdly, online communication is a grea...
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... stress working or learning thirdly, online communication is a great wife to ...
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...ife to shorten the distance of culture. each country have a proud Culture, so is v...
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...distance of culture. each country have a proud Culture, so is very valuable to k...
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...e of culture. each country have a proud Culture, so is very valuable to know as ...
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...ble to know as much culture as possible.The more people know about the countrys cul...
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...nication online also become a concern. firstly is also a place where many deceitful t...
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...come a concern. firstly is also a place where many deceitful things happening. y...
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...y be cheated if you aren’t of sound mind enough. next you can be exploited or eve...
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...ing any relationship in the internet. everything has 2 sides and that is good or not dep...
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...he negative points Is very essential but elicit the positive points is important ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, third, thirdly, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1273.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07171314741 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87582073766 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637450199203 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.6484593837 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.9230769231 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3076923077 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.69230769231 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 39.0 5.01903807615 777% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223178045789 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0684441955225 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586863017878 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106511313916 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0584924335494 0.056905535591 103% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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