Although, women’s image is usually associated with taking care of children, it is so rubbish that many people limit women's role here. In modern life, women have proven for the world that their ability is not just to take care of children.
Firstly, nowadays women have more and more influence in our life. Many fields such as politics, culture, economy, commerce all have figures of women. Many women are holding many important positions in state apparatus, corporation, business, etc. Not only they can do but also can do as well as men do, even do better. They have more potential than many people know or think, so don't restrict them in a role only.
Secondly, bringing up children is their vocation. They can do that and they love doing that, but it does not mean that you can force them to just do that. They have their life and their decision depends on them. Given that their capacity now, they can both look after their children and be independent and successful women.
Today is the 21st century, so everyone should change their own mind about women.They have motherhood but it is not the reason for anyone’s thinking that they can only play this role. All of the world should have a new view about women and give them a more appropriate status in our life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, well, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 20.9802955665 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 17.0 31.9359605911 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1051.0 1207.87684729 87% => OK
No of words: 225.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67111111111 5.00649968141 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27851370225 2.71678728327 84% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 139.433497537 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591111111111 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 326.7 379.143842365 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.247100685 50.4703680194 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.8461538462 104.977214359 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3076923077 20.9669160288 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46153846154 7.25397266985 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251687713732 0.242375264174 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0986717520798 0.0925447433944 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610072726134 0.071462118173 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170505877119 0.151781067708 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0592706651852 0.0609392437508 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 12.6369458128 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.1260098522 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.9458128079 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 11.5310837438 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 55.0591133005 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 60.5 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.