The development of media and advertising has helped many people get in the limelight. Gradually, they are supposed to have the responsibility to set an example for others by their good behavior. I partly agree with this suggestion and I will explain below
On the first hand, people in the limelight have wide repercussions for the spiritual life of people. Therefore they easily affect many people by their behavior. Of course, if the behavior is good, it will be learnt by many people and become a beautiful inspiration to the community.
Secondly, concerned, loved by many people, famous people are also emulated. So, to have a striking image, they have to bring out positive energy by having polite behavior.
Last but not least, the age concerning and following them usually is teenage. Because they are not mature enough, hence, they need a person with good behavior to take them as their model, a lighthouse in their youth.
However, no matter how famous they are, they are just normal people. From that, you can not force them to always have great behavior. Sometimes, you should allow them to have a chance if they make a mistake (under circumstances that they are not too serious, they do not break the law and go against morality) and have ordinary life when they are not on stage.
The famous have attention of many people and earn money from that also means their behavior will become a notice of many people. The more noble behavior they have, the more advantages they get. But if they too tired of being a model, please let them have a usual life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1299.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75824175824 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46838616686 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549450549451 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4042040052 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.6 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309309874318 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117733051722 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12241840194 0.0667982634062 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183297259605 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104129334054 0.056905535591 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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