These days, in many countries, fewer and fewer people want to become teachers, particularly in secondary schools. What are the reasons for this, and how could the problem be solved?
Recently, many countries have seen a significant fall in the number of people who choose the career of a teacher. Especially, some secondary schools nowadays lack teachers that they have to assign one teacher to teach many subjects. As this trend is so alarming, it is important for the policy makers to identify the reasons and address them thoroughly.
There are some explanations for this concerning problem. To start with, the incomes of teachers may be too low compared to the effort they make. In order to attend an university of education, students have to be excellent when they are in high school and enthusiastic in the career. However, their salaries tend to be much lower than people who study subjects such as business and management, which have lower entrance requirements. Furthermore, it is increasingly difficult for teachers to teach lessons in their favourite style. This could be attributed to the unified education system, which requires all students to learn the same knowledge, with the predetermined way of teaching. As a result, the creativity and enthusiasm of teachers might be hindered, making the job of teaching less desirable for most people.
Having the causes of the issue discussed, solutions can now be given accordingly. First of all, it is crucial for the government to raise teachers’ salaries. At first, this may appear to be expensive; nonetheless, in the long term, investments in education is likely to pay off and benefit the country considerably. In addition, the regulations applied to teachers also need relaxing. By doing this, teachers can hopefully deliver the lessons comfortably, which fosters people’s interests in this job. Consequently, the number of students attending education courses would be regained.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that low incomes and the restricted lecturing style are the main reasons that discourage people to become teachers. Therefore, the government should come up with measures which directly deal with them so that the career of a teacher could be more favourable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 165, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...he effort they make. In order to attend an university of education, students have ...
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Line 2, column 268, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...they are in high school and enthusiastic in the career. However, their salaries t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, may, nonetheless, second, so, therefore, thus, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1735.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25757575758 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98127150692 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587878787879 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.2978522515 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.3888888889 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8333333333 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269530061747 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0818672408489 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0344829551185 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164347122852 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351619283786 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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