The reading passage and the lecture are both talking about computerize smart cars. The writer claims several benefits by using this type of cars. However, the professor casts doubt on claim made in article. She believes, using computerize cars is not clear beneficial.
First, the author states, smart cars will decrease roads accidents. He mentions, these cars have a good equipment like sensors. Moreover, they are automatically programed. This statement is challenged by professor. She illustrates to accidents that might happen if these technology fell. There are many reasons that cause impairment of cars equipment. As a result, this benefit is not convincing.
In addition, the author asserts, using computerized cars will help to decrease traffic problems. These control cars can move behind each other smoothly. Therefore, it will be able to allow increasing highway speed. The lecture refutes this theory. She says, "historically research show that people can easily get drive experience with time." On the other hand, there is no increase in experience when using smart cars. Cars are driven by technological devices, which can not improve awareness with time like human being.
Finally, the passage elaborates on decreasing in the cost of driving as a consequent of using smart cars. The professor has the opposite idea. She thinks, the equipment which are used to make smart cars like sensors, and programed brakes are more expensive than money used for repair or change parts of an ordinary cars. Furthermore, when any part of a smart car is damaged, it is very expensive to replace it.
The reading passage and the lecture are both talking about computerize smart cars. The writer claims several benefits by using this type of cars. However, the professor casts doubt on claim made in article. She believes, using computerize cars is not clear beneficial.
First, the author states, smart cars will decrease roads accidents. He mentions, these cars have a good equipment like sensors. Moreover, they are automatically programed. This statement is challenged by professor. She illustrates to accidents that might happen if these technology fell. There are many reasons that cause impairment of cars equipment. As a result, this benefit is not convincing.
In addition, the author asserts, using computerized cars will help to decrease traffic problems. These control cars can move behind each other smoothly. Therefore, it will be able to allow increasing highway speed. The lecture refutes this theory. She says, "historically research show that people can easily get drive experience with time." On the other hand, there is no increase in experience when using smart cars. Cars are driven by technological devices, which can not improve awareness with time like human being.
Finally, the passage elaborates on decreasing in the cost of driving as a consequent of using smart cars. The professor has the opposite idea. She thinks, the equipment which are used to make smart cars like sensors, and programed brakes are more expensive than money used for repair or change parts of an ordinary cars. Furthermore, when any part of a smart car is damaged, it is very expensive to replace it.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The reading passage and the lecture are ...
^^
Line 2, column 100, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'good equipment'.
Suggestion: good equipment
...ccidents. He mentions, these cars have a good equipment like sensors. Moreover, they are automa...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 268, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this technology' or 'these technologies'?
Suggestion: this technology; these technologies
...rates to accidents that might happen if these technology fell. There are many reasons that cause...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 352, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ly get drive experience with time.' On the other hand, there is no increase ...
^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...awareness with time like human being. Finally, the passage elaborates on decre...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, in addition, talking about, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.4613686534 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 12.0772626932 58% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 22.412803532 85% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 30.3222958057 96% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1357.0 1373.03311258 99% => OK
No of words: 257.0 270.72406181 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28015564202 5.08290768461 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80428423187 2.5805825403 109% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 145.348785872 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622568093385 0.540411800872 115% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 419.366225166 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 3.25607064018 369% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 13.0662251656 161% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 21.2450331126 56% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.0341440164 49.2860985944 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.619047619 110.228320801 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.2380952381 21.698381199 56% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.95238095238 7.06452816374 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 4.33554083885 231% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.478912074602 0.272083759551 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129417189909 0.0996497079465 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10517703301 0.0662205650399 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.319635865374 0.162205337803 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.222352049527 0.0443174109184 502% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.3589403974 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.84 53.8541721854 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.2 11.0289183223 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.46 12.2367328918 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.42419426049 101% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 63.6247240618 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 10.7273730684 37% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.498013245 65% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The reading passage and the lecture are ...
^^
Line 2, column 100, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'good equipment'.
Suggestion: good equipment
...ccidents. He mentions, these cars have a good equipment like sensors. Moreover, they are automa...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 268, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this technology' or 'these technologies'?
Suggestion: this technology; these technologies
...rates to accidents that might happen if these technology fell. There are many reasons that cause...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 352, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ly get drive experience with time.' On the other hand, there is no increase ...
^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...awareness with time like human being. Finally, the passage elaborates on decre...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, in addition, talking about, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.4613686534 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 12.0772626932 58% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 22.412803532 85% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 30.3222958057 96% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1357.0 1373.03311258 99% => OK
No of words: 257.0 270.72406181 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28015564202 5.08290768461 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80428423187 2.5805825403 109% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 145.348785872 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622568093385 0.540411800872 115% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 419.366225166 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 3.25607064018 369% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 13.0662251656 161% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 21.2450331126 56% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.0341440164 49.2860985944 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.619047619 110.228320801 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.2380952381 21.698381199 56% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.95238095238 7.06452816374 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 4.33554083885 231% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.478912074602 0.272083759551 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129417189909 0.0996497079465 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10517703301 0.0662205650399 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.319635865374 0.162205337803 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.222352049527 0.0443174109184 502% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.3589403974 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.84 53.8541721854 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.2 11.0289183223 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.46 12.2367328918 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.42419426049 101% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 63.6247240618 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 10.7273730684 37% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.498013245 65% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.