The reading passage and the lecture are talking about people who buy franchise from other companies to begin there own business. The author claims several advantages from buying franchise. However, the professor casts doubt on claim made in article. She has different opinions about franchising.
In the beginning, the author states, franchise provide owners with specific reliable suppliers who provide them with goods and services, so this will protect franchise owners from the risk of serious losses. This statement is challenged by professor. She mentions, owner will be enforced to buy from those suppliers that franchising company deal with. However, there are many other places which might offer fair prices lower than suppliers cost.
In addition, the writer asserts, franchising owner can benefit from saving a lot of money by omits advertisement since franchising companies are already known. The lecturer in the other hand refutes this notion. She elaborates on the contract between franchise owners and company to give them 6% from their sales for advertising services. Moreover, franchising companies will not spend these money for owners products, but, for advertising their businesses.
Finally, the author contends, franchise provide more security than independent business. It will increase the rate of success in first year. The professor contradicts this idea. She points out, franchise owner will affect by all franchising companies. Owners might losses their money in first year. Furthermore, there is a third option which is not mentioned. People can buy business directly from other independent owners and be assure this business will gain money more than buying from franchising companies.
The reading passage and the lecture are talking about people who buy franchise from other companies to begin there own business. The author claims several advantages from buying franchise. However, the professor casts doubt on claim made in article. She has different opinions about franchising.
In the beginning, the author states, franchise provide owners with specific reliable suppliers who provide them with goods and services, so this will protect franchise owners from the risk of serious losses. This statement is challenged by professor. She mentions, owner will be enforced to buy from those suppliers that franchising company deal with. However, there are many other places which might offer fair prices lower than suppliers cost.
In addition, the writer asserts, franchising owner can benefit from saving a lot of money by omits advertisement since franchising companies are already known. The lecturer in the other hand refutes this notion. She elaborates on the contract between franchise owners and company to give them 6% from their sales for advertising services. Moreover, franchising companies will not spend these money for owners products, but, for advertising their businesses.
Finally, the author contends, franchise provide more security than independent business. It will increase the rate of success in first year. The professor contradicts this idea. She points out, franchise owner will affect by all franchising companies. Owners might losses their money in first year. Furthermore, there is a third option which is not mentioned. People can buy business directly from other independent owners and be assure this business will gain money more than buying from franchising companies.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 110, Rule ID: THERE_OWN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'their own'?
Suggestion: their own
...franchise from other companies to begin there own business. The author claims several adv...
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Line 2, column 169, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...services, so this will protect franchise owners from the risk of serious losses. ...
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Line 3, column 100, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...efit from saving a lot of money by omits advertisement since franchising companie...
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Line 3, column 388, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this money' or 'these moneys', 'these monies'?
Suggestion: this money; these moneys; these monies
...r, franchising companies will not spend these money for owners products, but, for advertisi...
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Line 4, column 195, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r contradicts this idea. She points out, franchise owner will affect by all franc...
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Line 4, column 218, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
.... She points out, franchise owner will affect by all franchising companies. Owners might...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, third, in addition, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 5.04856512141 198% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 7.30242825607 55% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 12.0772626932 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 22.412803532 80% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 30.3222958057 109% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1457.0 1373.03311258 106% => OK
No of words: 261.0 270.72406181 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.58237547893 5.08290768461 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6597103967 2.5805825403 103% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 145.348785872 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55938697318 0.540411800872 104% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 419.366225166 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 13.0662251656 145% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 21.2450331126 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.6857829202 49.2860985944 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.6842105263 110.228320801 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7368421053 21.698381199 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94736842105 7.06452816374 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.27373068433 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.459916752452 0.272083759551 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142854285826 0.0996497079465 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.14797055714 0.0662205650399 223% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.338259878398 0.162205337803 209% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.244353484583 0.0443174109184 551% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.3589403974 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 53.8541721854 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.49 12.2367328918 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.42419426049 100% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 63.6247240618 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.7273730684 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.498013245 69% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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