Many people believe that it is easier to have a healthy lifestyle in the countryside. Others believe that there are health benefits of living in the cities.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is said that there are conflicting views about the advantages of living in the rural and the urban areas. While some believe that residing in cities is beneficial for their health, I totally agree with those who prefer to settle in the countryside due to the contribution of its fresh environment to our physical health.
Firstly, although there are many kinds of medication in big cities, the pollution in such places may outweigh their welfare. The cities nowadays are full of pollution, traffic jam and the fact that more and more people are facing mental problems because of heavy-task works, therefore, all of them could be considered as main factors affected human’s life. According to VnExpress report, 85% of citizens agree that the hectic schedule and polluted air has led to the damage of their physical and mental health.
On the other hand, staying in rural regions seems to be a good choice for those who want to avoid the bad effect from the city lifestyle. There are number of benefits that could be gained while living in such areas, people are free from the overwhelming of work or they can even enjoy the polluted-free air there, which is very helpful for their lungs. In Norway, old generation has moved from cities to the countryside thanks to its benefits of improving health, furthermore, the old also tended to stay away from the stress they may face while living in big cities.
In conclusion, there are benefits of living in urban regions, but the risks of health in such place outnumbered its interest compared to that of rural one.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1306.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85501858736 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52169591015 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57249070632 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.8256928984 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.111111111 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8888888889 20.7667163134 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4444444444 7.06120827912 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179299632562 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0688690906483 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0358546340571 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106804420971 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410013115694 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.5 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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