Some people believe that government funding of the arts is necessary to ensure that the arts can flourish and be available to all people. Others believe that government funding of the arts threatens the integrity of the arts.
art is a reflection of the social, political and economical climate of a society. Various nuanses in history and culture is carried forward through time in the form of serveral artform, as seem in the case of Bhartnatim dances which is a form of storytelling and China's dragon festivle.
STEM related fields are funded by the goods and services that they provide in the free market, however art cannot contirubute to this market to the same extent. Hence often individuals stray away from pursuing their passion for art, and instead aim for a more secure future. It is essential for governments to provide funding to the numerous dying artforms that form the backbone of our culture and also to help fourish newer and creative artforms which are indictive of today's culture. this funding will provide incentive to students who want to purse a carrer in their choose field of art.
One of the most compiling arguments for the need for governemnt funding is seen in the example of dying art of tribal island of Andaman and Nicobar islands. Wooven leaves from the coconut tree forming beautiful animal silottes are hung at teh edges of forests to warn other tribal groups of the animal's territory in that part of the forest. this is a dying weav was essential is ensuring the animal's and the inhabitant's safety. this artform was the primary source of information about the wildlife existsng on the island.
- Science and technology will one day be able to solve all of society s problems
- Some people believe that government funding of the arts is necessary to ensure that the arts can flourish and be available to all people Others believe that government funding of the arts threatens the integrity of the arts 33
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 33.0505617978 36% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1173.0 2235.4752809 52% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 240.0 442.535393258 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8875 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.55969084622 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50388240206 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 215.323595506 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604166666667 0.4932671777 122% => OK
syllable_count: 368.1 704.065955056 52% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.2370786517 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1122064862 60.3974514979 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.3 118.986275619 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 23.4991977007 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3 5.21951772744 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181446869667 0.243740707755 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0711375404966 0.0831039109588 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546582486986 0.0758088955206 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109947949711 0.150359130593 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539672749958 0.0667264976115 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 14.1392134831 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 48.8420337079 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.38706741573 113% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 100.480337079 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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