Laws should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances, times, and places.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Laws are necessary in a country to maintain peace and justice. They need to be fair so that a person who has done a crime should be punished. The prompt here recommends that laws should be created to take into account of the possibility of several circumstances, time and places. In my opinion, I strongly agree with the suggestion and argue that laws must not be rigid and must be able to include multiple scenarios or possibilities so that there will be fairness in the society. The below two paragraphs will cast light on my personal perspective with an apt example.
To begin with, if laws are flexible then they will be able to help to draw a conclusion out of any case. To illustrate, let us look at the example of situation where a person was seen a min ago with the victim by the witness before the mishap happened. The person who is accused claims that after seeing his friend he left towards his apartment and did not hurt the victim. In this case even though the witness has seen that person does not mean that he is the criminal. It is highly possible that the person left towards his flat without doing anything and the proof can be presented.
Secondly, if the laws are flexible then they will help to provide justice to a person/authority. Consider the example of a woman who has been suffering from domestic violence by her husband. The man claims with a proof that he has not been practicing violence on his wife and request to declare him innocent. However, there is chance that in some other times or scenario where he could have been caught beating his wife and hence is accused of crime.
Of course, some people think that laws must be rigid and firm so that it will be easy to handle a case. Also, people can manipulate and find loop holes to come avoid getting accused of a crime. In my opinion, if the laws are not adjustable or cooperative then they will not be able to take into various possibilities of providing justice and drawing a conclusion.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, of course, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1622.0 2235.4752809 73% => OK
No of words: 359.0 442.535393258 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51810584958 5.05705443957 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54196855123 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506963788301 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 704.065955056 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.7890873234 60.3974514979 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.4117647059 118.986275619 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1176470588 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.82352941176 5.21951772744 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131987941151 0.243740707755 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0459115704678 0.0831039109588 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458058788865 0.0758088955206 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0844605915461 0.150359130593 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466542996199 0.0667264976115 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 14.1392134831 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 48.8420337079 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 12.1639044944 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 100.480337079 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.