Most people agree that money cannot be happiness.Why is happiness difficult to define?How can people achieve happiness?
In this changing world, Most of the people accepted that money is not the only thing to get Joy. In this essay, i will tell about the difficulties faced at the time of defining happiness and also going to discuss the ways for getting joy.
Happiness is difficult to define because it means something different to each individual person. Firstly, Joy depends on state of mind. To elaborate let us take an example about the two persons having multiple views on topic of Wildlife. 1 person is overjoyed by listening wildlife and other person reaction does not change. So it totally depends on the state of mindsets. Secondly, It depends on the feeling towards other person. If a person is closely attached to the opposite sex then there is affection towards that person. But as a coin has two sides, the feelings also have. For instance, Parents loves their childrens but may not have same feeling for someones pupil.
To achieve Happiness, person need to wake up everyday with a smile. Foremost, people need to clear all negative thoughts at the start of a day. By doing Yoga or meditation person can have a clear mind and a bright start of a day. For Instance, individual can be with someone whom you feel positive like you are on a blue moon. Furthermore, By doing good to other makes your inner soul blessed. By helping other in their bad time give the person to achieve inside happiness. Morover, you need to listen to your heart to get happiness. By putting heart and mind in the same place one can achieve happiness.
To conclude, Money does not only stand for happiness and also with state of mind and feelings It is hard to explain. However, I believe that with the help of smile, good deeds and inner soul one can achieve happiness.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ds on the feeling towards other person. If a person is closely attached to the opp...
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1439.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64193548387 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42180735908 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535483870968 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.0518148155 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.5238095238 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7619047619 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.67935871743 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166301547644 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0450206386746 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569065514998 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112719377791 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486291893072 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 13.0946893788 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.04 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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