Some old people today struggle with the use of modern technologies such as smart phones and computers. What is the cause of this and what are some possible solutions?
As technology is advancing in Leaps and bounds, there is a surge of new innovative devices and tools in the market. While, these technologies like Smart phones or personal computer have added to the luxury of your life, at the same time, it have proven to be difficult to comprehend by elderly people. This essay will discuss the possible reasons of this issue, and will also suggest some useful remedies.
Old people faces difficulties while operating laptops or smart phones primarily due to lack of familiarity with the System. These advancement in technologies and how it have conquered one day to day life is something they are experiencing at a very latter stage of their life Also, with time the ability of human brain grasp now learning reduces. For instance, a child of around eleven or twelve may learn to type early as compared to a sixty years old man.
Though, the reasons for such struggle among elderly people is understandable, there are a lot of solutions to cure this problem and make them comfortable with this. First of all, learning with full determination and optimism from the youth. Learning new technologies never goes in vain. It may take time to get used to it but it is never an impossible task. No one can learn any system in one day, continuous trying out hand on these will make a lot of difference.
To sum up, it is true that these new devices are something which could appear difficult to use by old people due to their unfamiliarity and age, but with continuous learning and hands on they can master it in no time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'innovative'.
Suggestion: innovative
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Line 1, column 242, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'has'?
Suggestion: has
...xury of your life, at the same time, it have proven to be difficult to comprehend by...
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Line 2, column 124, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this advancement' or 'These advancements'?
Suggestion: This advancement; These advancements
...to lack of familiarity with the System. These advancement in technologies and how it have conquer...
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Message: Did you mean 'has'?
Suggestion: has
... advancement in technologies and how it have conquered one day to day life is someth...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, while, for instance, first of all, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1281.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67518248175 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66407608774 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583941605839 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.7653453888 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.75 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8333333333 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227803718464 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0758803657359 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612001745992 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129470799425 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369451096735 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.