Mass media and the internet have caused people’s attention spans to get shorter. However, the overall effect has been positive: while people are less able to focus on one thing, they more than make up for it with an enhanced ability to sort through large quantities of information and find what’s important.
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Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
I agree with the claim that Mass media and the internet, even though have caused people's attention to get shorter, overall have provided positive effect and have proved to be beneficial. Internet provides surge of information about every field possible, and mass media and internet supported platform provides these information to public in variant ways, thus overall providing a wide array of information to choose from.
If, for instance, we take the example of Instagram platform, it has wide variety of pages and profiles which deals with various field, some deals with facts, some with current political trends, fashions, Hollywood, Bollywood, education and many more. People following these pages are exposed to ample of information in real-time. It is true the information provided in these platform are rather precise, but that is to provide a quick screening process for the user to choose from, and then, there is also an option to read more about it. This way person is exposed to all kinds of knowledge, they are aware of top news, trends, and can also acquire detailed information of the field of their interest.
If someone is watching a news channel, they broadcast information about any particular news for hours and it is kind of redundant too, spending an hour in front of television, can let you get the news about limited number of topics, but browsing internet, we can search directly the field and the latest news around it. Now a days, any important news are first reaching to people in the form of these social media platform. We instantly get the notification from these websites and helps us to be up to date without spending much time searching for right television channel or waiting next day for the newspaper.
Internet and Mass media have helped people to develop the enhanced ability to sort through large quantities of information. It is an essential ability of person to sort the information and read only the required part. People must know how to grasp maximum in minimum span of time and social media have been blessing in enhancing this ability. People have developed a sense of their need, interest and passion in better. If someone is constantly reading and viewing the content related to sports, he is sports fans. Internet is helping people to develop interest in the field of their liking.
Thus, considering the above points, it is clear that, though internet have caused people's focus timeframe to get reduced, it also at the same time have been positive and have been proving out to be beneficial to human being by developing better mental abilities of focus, sorting and exposure.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, then, thus, for instance, kind of, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 58.6224719101 116% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2191.0 2235.4752809 98% => OK
No of words: 441.0 442.535393258 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96825396825 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58257569496 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55324367719 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 215.323595506 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53514739229 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 688.5 704.065955056 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 6.24550561798 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.366821054 60.3974514979 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.9375 118.986275619 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5625 23.4991977007 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4375 5.21951772744 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331304604193 0.243740707755 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111996315525 0.0831039109588 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.098179880742 0.0758088955206 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183741598013 0.150359130593 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0741314623934 0.0667264976115 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 14.1392134831 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 100.480337079 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.8971910112 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.