A generation ago, shifting in big cities of huge number of people was not a common scenario. However, nowdays , this problem is a major concern and main issue in current world. In this essay I will discuss some core of the problems of this situation and propose some solid solutions.
One of the main problem is that poverty among city dwellers. By this I mean due to destitiute living condition people in big cities generally create dearth of employment. All of the people in this cities can not be able to find theit job in order to sustain their family. For example, In Bangladesh substantioal number of people are moving toward the Dhaka city and 40% of them are unemployed. The solution for this problem is that government industrialists have to take effective effort to establish new industries and creating precise commodities in rural are in order to make sure that people will not choose to live big cities instead of other parts of the country. Aftermath it will not create job problems in big cities
Another reason is that crime. That is to say in post surreal era when scores of people started to live in big cities paralaly it leads to rocketed up the crime rates in major huge cities. That is to say, catistrophical living condition and dearth of basic needs uplift several types of crime along with juvenile. To tackle this issue law enforcement organization have to put much more effort to protect the crimes in big cities which is happening by extra people who choose to stay is big cities and accumulate young and teen people who shifted to big cities and encourage them to start up jobs with the help of government ang organizations.
To sum up, the problems by increasing number of people who choose to live in big cities due to the reasons such as unsufficient employment, prolifirating number of crimes and juvenile. It is a serious problem unless creating industries and ancillaries in village areas, creating opportunities in order to prevent urban crimes. I believe the main responsibility for solving this problem lies with people and government.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, well, for example, i mean, such as, to sum up, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 41.998997996 157% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1722.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83707865169 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73624881327 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497191011236 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.5782089745 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.8 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7333333333 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.402120578299 0.244688304435 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146130710115 0.084324248473 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0647932740979 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.263428266549 0.151304729494 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0659423745607 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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