Some people think that sports play an important role in society. Others think they are nothing more than a leisure activity. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Regarding the issue of sports, there has been considerable controversy as some people hold the view that it is merely a recreational activity. From my perspective, I am inclined that sports are beneficial on both individual and societal levels.
On the one hand, it is beyond doubt that for some individuals, sports are pleasurable pastimes since there are other aspects of life that are more important to emphasize on. Evidently, many adults can only engage in such activities in their spare time due to the hectic pace of life. That is to say, they usually spend their time working and earning money in order to meet the increasing living expenses; hence, they only take up sports for fun rather than professionally. For instance, in Viet Nam, individuals often gather at the parks or playgrounds, forming teams and joining amateur matches to simply release stress and take a break from daily responsibilities. In fact, these matches have little impact on the local communities and very few players have the intention of following a career in sports’ field.
On the other hand, sports can derive innumerable benefits to the society. Undoubtedly, playing sports can help promoting a healthy lifestyle as it can have numerous desirable influences on individuals’ health. To be more specific, doing sports frequently can help fortify muscles, enhance the immune system and balance the blood circulation, reducing the risks of obesity and heart diseases. Moreover sports can contribute significantly to the nations’ economy. In fact, should the governments organise different sports’ championships, the sports fans worldwide will be willing to pay a huge sum of money for the tickets. In addition, by making use of those events, the tourism and commercial fields can also be developed.
In conclusion, while I agree that sports can be an enjoyable pastime, I also hold the view that sports are indispensable parts of the societies' development.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 111, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to promote' or 'promote'.
Suggestion: to promote; promote
...y. Undoubtedly, playing sports can help promoting a healthy lifestyle as it can have nume...
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Line 3, column 392, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...he risks of obesity and heart diseases. Moreover sports can contribute significantly to ...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...mmercial fields can also be developed. In conclusion, while I agree that sports c...
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Line 4, column 135, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'societies'' or 'society's'?
Suggestion: societies'; society's
...t sports are indispensable parts of the societies development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, regarding, so, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1642.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24600638978 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01211034752 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626198083067 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5843841608 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.285714286 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3571428571 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.85714285714 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178534731785 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0587866594028 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0410842906727 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110882020816 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0184002553499 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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