Recently, abortion increases rapidly and becomes a controversial topic. Some people suppose that abortion should be legal while others are against it.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Abortion has been a topic of much debate ever since medical technology has enabled the ease of getting one. In recent times, abortion has drastically increased and casued an unprecented uproad among religious communities. I am of the view that abortion should be legal as it empowers women and gives them full control of something as significant as bringing a child into the world.
Childbirth is considered a sacred act by many religious groups. A new life is indeed a miracle and abortion stands in stark contrast of this. While there are many reasons for a woman to opt for abortions, some of them being medical and necessary. But none of them concerns anyone outside herself and in some cases her partner.
There is no doubt that being a parent is a substantial responsibility. It requires parents to make huge compromises well until the child is an adult. In addition, it requires tremendous mental, emotional, physical and financial resources right when the child is born so it can be raised to be happy and healthy.
The religious view does not take this into consideration when advocating making abortion illegal. Millions of children suffer every year because their teen mother was barred from getting an abortion. In the US, thousands suffer in the foster care system and are separated from their siblings. Many live in abyssmal conditions, neglected and abused, something that no child should have to suffer.
This is not to say that abortion is the only answer. If those advocating against abortion can promise new mothers support right from neonatal care to college education, abortions may become less frequent. This should be a basic right regardless of the legal status of abortions.
On the other hand, women should be able to have the agency to decide if they want to have a baby. Their body, health, well-being, future and that of the child is solely dependent on this decision. Hence, it is their right to decide what is best for them first and foremost.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, may, so, well, while, in addition, no doubt, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1655.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94029850746 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65938152421 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576119402985 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.4406182 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.75 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.75 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231933801599 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614209172711 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544349962035 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11296578566 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0769800257761 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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