You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The first chart below shows the results of a survey which sampled a cross-section of 100,000 people asking if they traveled abroad and why they traveled for the period 1994-98.
The second chart shows their destinations over the same period.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below
The given table chart depicts the outcome of the survey which was done between one lakh's people telling about their destination country and also stating reson for travel in the bar chart for the period of five year between 1994-1998.
Overall, it is clear that majority accounted for holiday and also Western Europe is the most popular among travellers, while least travelled is for other reason. However, no drastic change is observed in number of travellers for North America.
To begin with, holiday was the most preferred location in 1998 which stands for about 20,700 people travelling abroad. However, travel for business purpose and family gathering remain almost same below 4000 person, between 1997 and 1998. The gradual increase in travel for holiday, business, friend or family meetup and other reason was seen in Western Europe for three consequetive years that is from 1995 to 1997 below 3700 individual.
On the other hand, in 1994, 1995 and 1998, many person travells for other reason which in total was 2700 and least was observed for North America. A gradual increase is shown in other areas of travel for the given period of 5 years.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 208, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'person' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'people', 'persons'.
Suggestion: people; persons
...gathering remain almost same below 4000 person, between 1997 and 1998. The gradual inc...
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Line 7, column 44, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun person seems to be countable; consider using: 'many people', 'many persons'.
Suggestion: many people; many persons
...the other hand, in 1994, 1995 and 1998, many person travells for other reason which in tota...
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Line 7, column 110, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'least' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'littles'.
Suggestion: littles
...ther reason which in total was 2700 and least was observed for North America. A gradu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so, while, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 968.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 193.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01554404145 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23558167934 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580310880829 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0323332956 43.030603864 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.0 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.125 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 5.23603664747 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225734731893 0.215688989381 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114566318186 0.103423049105 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524710204972 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153496874834 0.15604864568 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0482176059709 0.0819641961636 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.2329268293 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.