Many lives might be saved if inoculations against cow flu were routinely administered to all people in areas where the disease is detected. However, since there is a small possibility that a person will die as a result of the inoculations, we cannot permit inoculations against cow flu to be routinely administered.
According to author, the lives of all the people in the region where cow flu is detected might be saved if inoculation is administered routinely. Further he mentions, that inoculators cannot permit inoculations to be routinely administered because of the less posssibility of a person will die. But he failed to provide evdiences for his statements.
Firstly, in the very first sentence, it is said that many lives "might be" saved if inaoculation against disease were administered. It clearly shows that it administation of inoculation is not only the thing is necessary if it they are not firmed about it. There might be other solutions to cure cow flu such as people should go away from the region where cow flu is detected.
Secondly, Even if they run inoculation, because of the small chances of person death due to inoculations, they did not want permitinoculation against cow flu. But, they have provided enough explaination or evidences to show that people will die because of incoculation. They have not provided information to their postulate whether inoculation is actually tested or not. So, how they are saying there is small possiblity of a death of person?
In sum, administrators of inoculations failed to provide evidences for their two given statements. First, they can't say firmly that inoculation against cow flu save lives of people in the area where it is administered. Second, they talk about small possiblity that a person will die because of inoculation but failed to say on what basis they found small possiblity of death of people.
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Comments
e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 7 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 9 2
No. of Sentences: 13 15
No. of Words: 258 350
No. of Characters: 1273 1500
No. of Different Words: 124 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.008 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.934 4.6
Word Length SD: 3.001 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 84 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 59 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 44 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 36 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.846 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.419 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.846 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.37 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.576 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.083 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 275, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e will die because of incoculation. They have not provided information to their p...
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Line 7, column 112, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...their two given statements. First, they cant say firmly that inoculation against cow...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.6327345309 81% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.9520958084 62% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 11.1786427146 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 13.6137724551 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 28.8173652695 90% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 55.5748502994 61% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 16.3942115768 79% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1320.0 2260.96107784 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 258.0 441.139720559 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11627906977 5.12650576532 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.56307096286 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10335164279 2.78398813304 111% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 204.123752495 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519379844961 0.468620217663 111% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 705.55239521 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.96107784431 161% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.76447105788 11% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.22255489022 95% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 19.7664670659 66% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 22.8473053892 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.7771455963 57.8364921388 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 101.538461538 119.503703932 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8461538462 23.324526521 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92307692308 5.70786347227 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.25449101796 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.20758483034 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 6.88822355289 116% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.46981499363 0.218282227539 215% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164495260701 0.0743258471296 221% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120019146761 0.0701772020484 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.302551631498 0.128457276422 236% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109091410319 0.0628817314937 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 14.3799401198 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.3550499002 108% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.1628742515 156% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.197005988 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.5979740519 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.32208582834 95% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 98.500998004 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 12.3882235529 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.1389221557 86% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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