Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well-being of the societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that the only responsibility of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to make as much money as possible.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
I, to a greater extent, agree with the latter part of the sentence which claims that the only responsibility of corporation is to make money (provided they operate within law). I would like to enumerate my viewpoints and opinions on the same in the following paragraph.
We might have, more often than not, heard this saying - "Money is always ultimate" - from people, friends or movies. And it has been a pretty established fact by now that humans are greedy; obviously not all, but more like a generalized statement. The corporation too, is filled with normal human beings and is run by these people. Yes, they definitely have an objective and that is to promote the well-being of the societies and environment in which they operate. But, try asking anyone in and around your society the question - Are you satisfied with the working of our corporation? Many would disagree with this without thinking twice. The fact that people answer this question without much deliberation clearly sums it up. Let's make it more evident with an example. When I was walking down the road one evening, I saw a dead dog lying right in the middle of a road. I was nonplussed facing the situation but soon realized it is the corporation of the town I should be contacting. When I did so, they gave me a vague answer at first as to why they can not make it and then a few seconds later, the person from corporation audaciously told "It is a Sunday, we will not come". I was shocked at this response. With all due respect to people taking off from work on certain days, was the response I got from corporation just?
I am sure this is not just the case with me, but all of those people who would be dismissing the claims about corporation doing justice to their work would have at least one such story to back them up. The same template of corporation can be extended to the government of a state as well, where they resort to dirty politics to make huge sums of money. The MLAs of Tamil Nadu were once caught in a resort with trucks filled with black money is the outskirts when there was a stringent check inside the city. These are real life examples which I have encountered and to imagine the population of my nation, it is no more a worry, but makes me feel scared. It is high time that these people in corporation realize their importance and role they ought to play for the betterment of society.
I am not outright blaming everyone; there are some who would go to any extent to make their society a better place to live. And if there are more such people, the environment and society will only prosper. Instead, most of these who constitute the major part of corporation body succumb to cupidity and blaming human nature in their defense. I would like to conclude by saying that, as much as everyone quotes "Money is always ultimate", there is more to life and money, at the end of the day, can not get everything that one wishes for.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 738, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, then, well, as to, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 19.5258426966 149% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 33.0505617978 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 77.0 58.6224719101 131% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 12.9106741573 170% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2428.0 2235.4752809 109% => OK
No of words: 530.0 442.535393258 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58113207547 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79809637944 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60201805869 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 275.0 215.323595506 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518867924528 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 773.1 704.065955056 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 6.24550561798 240% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9531577624 60.3974514979 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.166666667 118.986275619 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0833333333 23.4991977007 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.29166666667 5.21951772744 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289569092034 0.243740707755 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0779382608391 0.0831039109588 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.092939563242 0.0758088955206 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18883336249 0.150359130593 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0760623254018 0.0667264976115 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.8420337079 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 12.1639044944 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 100.480337079 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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