An English-speaking friend has written to you to ask you how your IELTS studies are going.
Write a letter telling your friend how you are preparing for the test. In your letter:
say what progress you are making
explain how you are preparing for the test
say which section you are finding the most difficult
You should write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any address.
Dear Ria,
I hope you are doing great. It's always pleasure to receive your letter and to hear about your well-being. Well, you asked me about the preparation of Ielts exam. So far, everything is going smoothly and getting better each day in all modules.
As you already know that I am part-time working in restaurant and could not get the chance to enroll for Ielts classes due to working hours. But now, I have joined online classes which are very helpful in providing all the essential information about exam pattern and preparation material. And, I also given mock test 2-3 times and getting better score every time.
But there is one issue regarding the speaking module, I could not able to get more than 6.5 band in this section. As, I start mumbling or sometimes, could not get the confidence or fluency while speaking on topic. You have scored 8 band in speaking, could you help me in this section?
I hope to hear from you soon.
Yours Friend,
Raman
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2021-09-10 | Ramandeep Dhaliwal | 73 | view |
| 2020-04-12 | kjot_59 | 73 | view |
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- An English speaking friend has written to you to ask you how your IELTS studies are going Write a letter telling your friend how you are preparing for the test In your letter say what progress you are making explain how you are preparing for the test say 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 30, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...Dear Ria, I hope you are doing great. Its always pleasure to receive your letter ...
^^^
Line 3, column 62, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hat I am part-time working in restaurant and could not get the chance to enroll f...
^^
Line 4, column 232, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'band' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'bands'.
Suggestion: bands
...le speaking on topic. You have scored 8 band in speaking, could you help me in this ...
^^^^
Line 6, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...pe to hear from you soon. Yours Friend, Raman
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, regarding, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 794.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6432748538 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36177683299 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0636944262 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.1666666667 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.25 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.08333333333 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275249552952 0.216113520407 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10540996987 0.0766984524023 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0765200841932 0.0603063233224 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151726421954 0.12726935374 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0615699175786 0.0580467560999 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.04 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.