New Parents Should Receive Training In Parenting

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New Parents Should Receive Training In Parenting

These days, training courses in parenting have become increasingly popular. In this regard, there is an opinion that young parents should take these courses for a good upbringing of their children. As for me, I believe that this approach is the most correct.
On the one hand, parenting courses are helpful for new parents. Firstly, these courses can help parents learn the basic principles of parenting. Moreover, they can get to know how to deal with problematic situations that require immediate decision-making. This knowledge will help avoid accidents due to parental ignorance.
Secondly, courses will help not only mothers but also fathers to be engaged in child-rearing. Often fathers are not so involved in the upbringing because of ignorance of how to take care of a child. And thanks to the course, they will learn more useful information and will no longer be afraid to make a child care mistake.
On the other hand, there is an opinion about the optional completion of parenting training courses due to their high cost. Most parents cannot afford to undergo parenting training because of their poor financial situation. In addition, such programmes do not guarantee that the upbringing of children will ultimately be good. In other words, courses are not always taught by certified specialists, which subsequently leads to the incorrect presentation of material to parents.
In conclusion, I want to emphasize that despite all the disadvantages of parenting courses, they will still be useful and will give a basic understanding of parenting, which can be supplemented with their knowledge and ideas.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... presentation of material to parents. In conclusion, I want to emphasize that de...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, as for, in addition, in conclusion, in other words, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1359.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2471042471 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94210014285 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555984555985 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.2304472867 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.6 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2666666667 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.26666666667 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262331633718 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0994406941717 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106179225475 0.0667982634062 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145836766644 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0914365257857 0.056905535591 161% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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