The graph below compares the number of visits to two new music sites on the web. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The line graph represents a differentiation of the visitors who visited two newly musical web portals.
Overall, what stands out from the graph is that over 15 days periods except for 2 days more people visit pop parade than the music choice. According to the picture, during this time in a day maximum of 170000 people enter the pop parade music site, while in the case of music choice the number is 120000.
On the first day, the difference between the visitors of the two websites is almost 80000. The difference increases in the next day, while the pop parade has almost 120000 visitors, at the same period music choice has 20000. On the third day, the number of visitors remained almost the same in the case of the pop parade. On the other hand, visitors of the music choice increases rapidly to 60000 then up to the day number 11 there is up and down and remained between 30000 and 20000.
Though, the number of browsing on the pop parade decreases until day 9 then in the next two days it rises quickly to 150000 then climb down and again upgraded to 170000 within two days. The same trend for music choice it’s peak number reached at 14th day at123000 and after that drift off to 70000.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, then, third, while, except for, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 988.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 218.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53211009174 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15498709111 2.65546596893 81% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 283.5 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.8294063895 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.777777778 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2222222222 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 5.23603664747 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153043377267 0.215688989381 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0783609927713 0.103423049105 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480423334069 0.0843802449381 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120677321358 0.15604864568 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480114545353 0.0819641961636 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.29 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.57 8.06136585366 81% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 40.7170731707 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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