Needless to say that mobile phones wreak havoc not only on developed nations but also on third world countries has led to a catastrophic scenario caused by infinite reasons which conjoint to add insult to injury. A see has witnessed before two decades people were aware about society and less dependent on digital phone. . The following essay would elucidate the possible reasons and solution of handy-device before coming to the final conclusion.
The fact that modern technology is becoming smarter and smarter relates to one of the biggest problems caused by mobile phones. People are able to access a large number of entertainment forms at any place just by using these mobile gadgets, so they tend to be less aware of society and more dependent on technology. It is not hard to recognize many groups of friends walking side-by-side but having their heads on smartphones instead of spending their time with each other. Moreover, when people have started to depend too much on smart technology, they would get lazier, and yet become unable to complete even simple daily tasks.
We know in totality that action speaks louder than words. There are colossal ways and means to combat the menacing impact of using mobile phones on this globe but the onus is entirely on self-awareness. People must learn how to control themselves, especially their needs of consuming media, and know clearly the importance of human-bonding. There are cases where parents overuse mobile phones in order to help them with children caring. Understanding this, some game providers have introduced products with limited consuming time and all-age-appropriate contents, which are now being expanded widely.
In recapitulation, this cause needs attention and expedite action to protect our bonding with friends. Undoubtedly, every lock has a key it is plausible not byenforcing or enacting the law; however, it should be done by means ofeducating people about its nasty effects.
- Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like Others believe that they should be only allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future such as those related to science and technology Discuss both these views and 65
- Some people believe that women should play an equal role as mean in a country s police force or military force such as the army while others think women are not suitable for these kinds of jobs Discuss both views and give your opinion 84
- The Internet has dramatically altered our lives over the past few decades Although some of these changes have been negative the overall effect of this technology has been positive what are your opinions on this 11
- WRITING TASK 2 You should spend about 40 minutes on this task Write about the following topic The Internet has dramatically altered our lives over the past few decades Although some of these changes have been negative the overall effect of this technology 80
- Some people think that university students should study whatever they like Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future such as those related to science and technology Discuss both views and give y 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, moreover, so, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1647.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24522292994 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82425516439 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.662420382166 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7338511446 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.642857143 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4285714286 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.78571428571 7.06120827912 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172727064318 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0460136995427 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0365519205874 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.080927016056 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558086192561 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.