The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Panama City from 2010 to 2019.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates how many crimes in various categories (burglary, car theft and robbery) in the city named Panama over the course of nine years, starting in 2010.
Overall, it is immediately obvious that the rates experienced an insignificant change, with the exception of burglary. At the start of the period, burglary was the most common crime, which was replaced by car theft.
In terms of cars, the number of incidents related to crime stood at nearly equal to 3000. This figure remained unchanged before descending dramatically and hitting the lowest point of merely over 2000 in 1993, followed by a steady increase in the remaining years. A similar pattern was seen in robbery. Despite some slight fluctuations over the period, the statistics remained equal to the beginning level, which caused around 750 incidents.
On the other hand, the number of burglaries witnessed a downward trend. Although the figure increased steadily in the first year period and peaked at approximately 3800 incidents, it underwent a notable dip in the four following years and hit the bottom of precisely 1000. This was followed by a slight growth from 2015 to 2019.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 55, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'categories'' or 'category's'?
Suggestion: categories'; category's
... illustrates how many crimes in various categories burglary, car theft and robbery in th...
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Line 1, column 65, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...es how many crimes in various categories burglary, car theft and robbery in the ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...egories burglary, car theft and robbery in the city named Panama over the course...
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Line 3, column 88, Rule ID: WITH_THE_EXCEPTION_OF[1]
Message: Use simply 'except' or 'except for'
Suggestion: except; except for
...es experienced an insignificant change, with the exception of burglary. At the start of the period, b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 981.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13612565445 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69889067118 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 106.607317073 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.664921465969 0.547539520022 121% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.8439967595 43.030603864 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 5.23603664747 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.060095687462 0.215688989381 28% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0233176733856 0.103423049105 23% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0342461572667 0.0843802449381 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0407028782437 0.15604864568 26% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0331050810682 0.0819641961636 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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