irrefutably, in this contemporary era, people valued is important for take decision in their life. old people is more valued in some culture while other culture young generation is more valueable. this essay would shed light on the valid point on the subsequence paragraph.
Begin with old age people have more thinking power than young generation because of lot of experience in their life.old age people have achieved a many success in their life nontheless their children yet can not achieved more success. some culture believe in fiction story and old age human believe more in fiction story so it is one reason that they valued more.
Moving further, some culture believe in young people valued more because they known well technology development and how to use it. young people give a more sacrifice for their society and nation. today's young people is well educated. they can solved any problem and difficulty easily.young people valued more in some culture because they take decisions very quickly and sharply.
To sum up, it can be vividly manifested young and old both age's people value is more because of old people have more experience of their work and young people have knowledge of new technologies
- The crime rate will fall as advances in technology make it easier to detect and prevent crimes Do you agree or disagree 56
- In some cultures old age people are highly valued while in other cultures youth is more valued Discuss both views and give your own opinion 56
- Some people think that the purpose of TV news programs is to entertain viewers Others believe that news programs should be educational and informative What do you think the purpose of TV news programs is Support your opinion with reasons and examples 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Irrefutably
irrefutably, in this contemporary era, people value...
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Suggestion: Old
...ortant for take decision in their life. old people is more valued in some culture w...
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Suggestion: This
...ure young generation is more valueable. this essay would shed light on the valid poi...
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Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
...eir life.old age people have achieved a many success in their life nontheless their ...
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Line 2, column 148, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun success seems to be countable; consider using: 'many successes'.
Suggestion: many successes
...eir life.old age people have achieved a many success in their life nontheless their children...
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Line 2, column 213, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'achieve'
Suggestion: achieve
...e nontheless their children yet can not achieved more success. some culture believe in f...
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Suggestion: Some
...dren yet can not achieved more success. some culture believe in fiction story and ol...
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Message: Possible grammatical error. You used a past participle without using any required verb ('be' or 'have'). Did you mean 'knew'?
Suggestion: knew
...n young people valued more because they known well technology development and how to ...
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Suggestion: Todays
...sacrifice for their society and nation. todays young people is well educated. they can...
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Suggestion: They
.... todays young people is well educated. they can solved any problem and difficulty e...
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'solve'
Suggestion: solve
...young people is well educated. they can solved any problem and difficulty easily.young...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, while, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1015.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 202.0 315.596192385 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02475247525 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47261741455 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 176.041082164 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519801980198 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 333.0 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.6029151193 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.5 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.367328252565 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.174152609142 0.084324248473 207% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131008577142 0.0667982634062 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.258674070627 0.151304729494 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446365813834 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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