The only way to reduce the amount of traffic in cities today is by reducing the need for people to travel from home for work, education or shopping. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Reducing the amount of traffic in cities plays a vital role in a modern life. Naturally, reducing traffic has a powerful influence on the way we live and its effect is often positive. The present essay aims to discuss that reducing traffic is effective for at least three main reasons.
First and foremost, reducing the amount of traffic can be very helpful to those people who care about their health. For one thing, we often hear and read about controversial issues concerning traffic. Traffic can have terrible effects on physical health. Actually, it is causing unbelievable diseases specially among young people who communicate more than other people in different ages. For instance, people who live in metropolise cities suffer from Asthma and lung cancer because of high range of chemical materials in the air .Although, the big reason of chemical materials in air is factories . However, there are lots of ways to control its side-effects which can lead us to be optimistic about future of crowded cities. Another thing is that new developments reveal that traffic can be problematic for mind health. As an illustration, physiologists believe that people who get stuck in traffic feel anxious and stressful which make them feel negative the rest of day .
Second, it is generally admitted that reducing the amount of traffic by some ways can save time and energy. In the first place, getting stuck in bumper to bumper traffic makes people waste their time so it can have terrible effects on their personal and family relationships. As matter of fact,it makes them tired and lethargic so unfortunately they can not have enough time with their family or friends. By contrast, getting stuck in congestion traffic can be a interesting way to talk or spend more time with family members or friends who are in car with. An example may help clarify the point. Recent studies indicate that people in big cities who spend most of their times on traffic can not have good life balance on their works and relationships but it is possible to say that there are useful and helpful ways to prevent from these problems such as online communication during traffic. In the second place, traffic forces people to spend lots of money on buying petrol and gas which it wastes their money and non-renewable resources. All in all,traffic effects much more than we think it does .
The last but not least, reducing traffic by reducing the need for people to travel from home,education and shopping can help solving environmental issues. Professor Smith the head of ecology department at Ontario university asserts that technology helps us in many ways. Internet is an effective innovation at the end of 20th century and at beginning of 21st century. In fact ,in today's world ,people do not need to go out for their work or going shopping while they can access to internet to do their works at home and it have positive influence on environment. In 2020,Japanese people had high tendency to work online in their home instead of going to work-place which it decreased the amount of air and noise pollution noticeably when there we're not any traffic .Although, staying at home makes people isolated and depressed. The latest figures released by the World Health Organization (W.H.O) asserts that about 78 percent of people did not prefer using transportation during Corona pandemic .Actually they believed that it's not hygiene and safe so that it effects environment in positive ways. In other words, traffic can damage the environment and earth while we can reduce it's menacing side-effects by careful education, cooperation and planning.
To sum up,reducing the rate of traffic by reducing communication can be very helpful for at least three main reasons. However, the question is that can reducing traffic by these ways improve the health and happiness of the new generations in general? Only time will tell but in the meantime ,reducing traffic by mentioning ways continues to effect every aspect of every day lives.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 25.0 10.4138276553 240% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 22.0 7.30460921844 301% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 50.0 24.0651302605 208% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 90.0 41.998997996 214% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3101.0 1615.20841683 192% => OK
No of words: 618.0 315.596192385 196% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01779935275 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.98594081286 4.20363070211 119% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69841252191 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 302.0 176.041082164 172% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488673139159 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 963.0 506.74238477 190% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 16.0721442886 174% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.1866877254 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.75 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0714285714 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46428571429 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329013112835 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0972798341977 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0904311514619 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211357968995 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0570285279616 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 137.0 78.4519038076 175% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.