Art is considered an important part of a society as well as its expression of its culture. Do you think it is important for children to be taught art ? Do you think children should be encouraged to focus on art rather than other subjects?
Undoubtedly arts are the heritage of the country that identify a particular country with plethora of historical things. While i think that teaching arts to children is a good ideas, it must not be detrimental of other subjects.
On the one hand, expressing culture through arts is effective and it portrays positive picture of a nation. First of all, Arts elevate creativity and imagination as without creativeness and imagination children would struggle to survive in fast-paced world. Therefore, Arts should be taught to children during schooling. On the top of it, children can learn easily as they are curious to learn innovative things and also free from worries and stresses in early childhood. Secondly, Another advantage for children is that they can express their feelings and emotions as they do not have linguistic capacity to put their feelings in front of others , especially their parents. Consequently, if children are creative and know about art then they are able to provide their ideas and show their sentiments via arts. Finally, A few children are gifted in creative skills so arts help them to nurture and highlight their hidden talent. As a result, they can pursue a great career in the future as a artist as well as they can get name and fame in the life.
On the other hand, diverting their mind from other subjects can have diverse impact on the well- being of children. Firstly, Over time people begin to believe more in science and technology as that have had a number of changes in the lives of people. That is why, children should learn about the modern technology to get a better employment in upcoming time. It is important to note that, other subjects such as mathematics and science are used in everyday life so these enhances the overall knowledge of children. In addition to this, For the holistic development of children there should be balance of all subjects as all subjects are added in the school curriculum to make children aware of all and for developing them mentally and physically.
To conclude, Although arts have important role to play in the life of children yet i believe that all subjects should be taught to children in the early age so that they can grow in a positive environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1861.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 381.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8845144357 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6749072315 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511811023622 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 577.8 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.917329352 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.3125 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8125 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.75 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.347136082489 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118113351085 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0795690302554 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217809146537 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0132724811551 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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