People living in large cities have to face many problems in everyday life. What are those problems?
Should the government encourage people to move to regional towns?
In recent years, a significant number of the population has migrated towards cities that create many daily life issues. In the course of the essay, I will describe the issues faced by locals and explain the steps that should need to do it by authorities.
To begin with, that our cities are planned many years ago according to that population which native of that area. However, the number of people is increasing in cities to get facilities. This massive number of people caused many problems like traffic pollution and food security. For example, a city in Pakistan is designed for a five million population, but currently, 20 million people live there, due to these extra people that increased load on the city's rode, which damages early and enormous new vehicles that caused air pollution. If it disconnects from the rest of the country, then locals of this city will face a shortage of food. In addition, water and sewerage is a crucial issue that causes many diseases.
To solve these problems, governments need to develop towns on the other side of the country. Advanced education and respectable jobs are available in the main cities although these facilities and opportunities are not in small and new towns. Governments should ensure these things in that areas which basic right of the citizen. To improve the rate of migration, they should provide some financial assistance that supports the initial cost of bills.
In the conclusion, the massive population of the cities caused many problems which make the huge crisis although governments need to make the plane to move people in other areas
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, then, for example, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1345.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58783591754 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561338289963 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.185784444 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.461538462 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6923076923 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15384615385 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285750826172 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0903241668998 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559739656561 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160439662427 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0599147091999 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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