True success can be measured primarily in terms of the goals one sets for oneself

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 731, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'reflects'.
Suggestion: reflects
... that enrich academic life. When he/she reflect upon this process, true success can be ...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 1135, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...e goal and seized its market in a short period of time, but will anyone regard this was a true...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 33.0505617978 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 58.6224719101 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2590.0 2235.4752809 116% => OK
No of words: 536.0 442.535393258 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83208955224 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.81161862636 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56067765643 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 278.0 215.323595506 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518656716418 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 806.4 704.065955056 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.9395764135 60.3974514979 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.315789474 118.986275619 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2105263158 23.4991977007 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.57894736842 5.21951772744 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.523823849331 0.243740707755 215% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.194360475034 0.0831039109588 234% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129087036322 0.0758088955206 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.390963682531 0.150359130593 260% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.150146320223 0.0667264976115 225% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 14.1392134831 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 134.0 100.480337079 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.

Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.