The table below highlight data on the number of travellers using three major British airports between 1998 and 2003

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The table below highlight data on the number of travellers using three major British airports between 1998 and 2003.

The table illustrates data about how many people visited the Uk through three particular airports,over a five-year period between 1998 and 2003.Overall,what stands out from the graph is that there was a fluctuation in the number of visitors via Heathrow,while the figures for Gatwick and Stansted witnessed an upward trend.

Looking at the details,the number of people who travel via Heathrow started at 27,2 million in the first year,and then the figure rose significantly,to reach the highest point of 48,2 mln in 2000.Despite falling considerably  in 2002,the trend finished at 45,6 mln in the last year.

As regards Gatwick airport,the figure showed a considerable growth from 36,5 mln to 51,1 mln between 1998 and 2002.After that,there was a sharp increase to 69,3 mln in 2003,the figure being the peak number of passengers during the whole period.The number of passengers at Stansted was in a similar trend.The number began at the lowest point of 17,3 mln in 1998,after which the trend experienced a remarkable rise to 43,3 mln in 2001,before remaining stable at 43,3 mln in the last two years

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 98, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , over
...the Uk through three particular airports,over a five-year period between 1998 and 200...
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Line 1, column 145, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Overall
... five-year period between 1998 and 2003.Overall,what stands out from the graph is that ...
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Line 1, column 152, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , what
...ear period between 1998 and 2003.Overall,what stands out from the graph is that there...
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Line 1, column 254, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , while
...n in the number of visitors via Heathrow,while the figures for Gatwick and Stansted wi...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 23, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
... upward trend. Looking at the details,the number of people who travel via Heathro...
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Line 3, column 110, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , and
...tarted at 27,2 million in the first year,and then the figure rose significantly,to r...
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Line 3, column 149, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , to
...r,and then the figure rose significantly,to reach the highest point of 48,2 mln in ...
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Line 3, column 197, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Despite
...h the highest point of 48,2 mln in 2000.Despite falling considerably  in 2002,the trend...
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Line 3, column 225, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mln in 2000.Despite falling considerably  in 2002,the trend finished at 45,6 mln i...
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Line 5, column 27, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...last year. As regards Gatwick airport,the figure showed a considerable growth fro...
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Line 5, column 116, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: After
...5 mln to 51,1 mln between 1998 and 2002.After that,there was a sharp increase to 69,3...
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Line 5, column 126, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , there
...1,1 mln between 1998 and 2002.After that,there was a sharp increase to 69,3 mln in 200...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 245, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...r of passengers during the whole period.The number of passengers at Stansted was in...
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Line 5, column 305, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...gers at Stansted was in a similar trend.The number began at the lowest point of 17,...
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, then, while, as regards

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 928.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1843575419 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12273012972 2.65546596893 118% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614525139665 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.07073170732 467% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 59.0 22.4926829268 262% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.6524152243 43.030603864 208% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 309.333333333 112.824112599 274% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 59.6666666667 22.9334400587 260% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.3333333333 5.23603664747 255% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 1.69756097561 825% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154003142831 0.215688989381 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108565812512 0.103423049105 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563514907179 0.0843802449381 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108565812512 0.15604864568 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563514907179 0.0819641961636 69% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.8 13.2329268293 248% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 28.51 61.2550243902 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.9 10.3012195122 232% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.65 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.36 8.06136585366 129% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 25.6 10.9970731707 233% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 98, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , over
...the Uk through three particular airports,over a five-year period between 1998 and 200...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 145, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Overall
... five-year period between 1998 and 2003.Overall,what stands out from the graph is that ...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 152, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , what
...ear period between 1998 and 2003.Overall,what stands out from the graph is that there...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 254, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , while
...n in the number of visitors via Heathrow,while the figures for Gatwick and Stansted wi...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 23, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
... upward trend. Looking at the details,the number of people who travel via Heathro...
^^^^
Line 3, column 110, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , and
...tarted at 27,2 million in the first year,and then the figure rose significantly,to r...
^^^^
Line 3, column 149, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , to
...r,and then the figure rose significantly,to reach the highest point of 48,2 mln in ...
^^^
Line 3, column 197, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Despite
...h the highest point of 48,2 mln in 2000.Despite falling considerably  in 2002,the trend...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 225, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mln in 2000.Despite falling considerably  in 2002,the trend finished at 45,6 mln i...
^^
Line 5, column 27, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...last year. As regards Gatwick airport,the figure showed a considerable growth fro...
^^^^
Line 5, column 116, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: After
...5 mln to 51,1 mln between 1998 and 2002.After that,there was a sharp increase to 69,3...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 126, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , there
...1,1 mln between 1998 and 2002.After that,there was a sharp increase to 69,3 mln in 200...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 245, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...r of passengers during the whole period.The number of passengers at Stansted was in...
^^^
Line 5, column 305, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...gers at Stansted was in a similar trend.The number began at the lowest point of 17,...
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, then, while, as regards

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 928.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1843575419 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12273012972 2.65546596893 118% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614525139665 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.07073170732 467% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 59.0 22.4926829268 262% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.6524152243 43.030603864 208% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 309.333333333 112.824112599 274% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 59.6666666667 22.9334400587 260% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.3333333333 5.23603664747 255% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 1.69756097561 825% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154003142831 0.215688989381 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108565812512 0.103423049105 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563514907179 0.0843802449381 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108565812512 0.15604864568 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563514907179 0.0819641961636 69% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.8 13.2329268293 248% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 28.51 61.2550243902 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.9 10.3012195122 232% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.65 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.36 8.06136585366 129% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 25.6 10.9970731707 233% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.