Essay topics:
Having more money and less free is better than earning less money and having more free time.
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Essays by user jasvirkr
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- In many countries tradition food are being replaced by international fast food this is having a negative effect on both families and societies to what extent do you agree or disagree 67
- the money spent by government on space program should be better spent on vital public service schools and hospital to what extent do you agree or disagree The chart blow show the unemployment situation in Australia in the year 2012 73
- The diagram shows the process of recycling the plastics 80
- The process show how plants create food 61
- Nowadays many people want to buy famous brands of clothes cars other items what are the reason for this do you think it is a positive or negative development 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 108, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...nt of money as well as less time better as compared to earning small amount of mon...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, then, well, apart from, for example, in short, as a result, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1640.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71264367816 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28812151471 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.462643678161 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6361513785 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.142857143 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8571428571 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07142857143 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.419910754553 0.244688304435 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.180355559448 0.084324248473 214% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.190507004414 0.0667982634062 285% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.327533448161 0.151304729494 216% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105980759818 0.056905535591 186% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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