The general welfare of a nation's people is a better indication of that nation's greatness than are the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
The best way to indicate a society greatness is an observation of people welfare. The artists, rulers, and scientists' achievements are important too, but general comfort is the most important way to measure a nation's greatness.
There is no point of making expensive movies and awarding artists when people are hungry. Imagine a poor country like India where people do not have jobs and money to make good lives for themselves. On the other hand, rich super stars wear their expensive clothes to go to Bollywood. Therefor this nation needs to put the people first to make a good environment for the country. Instead of spending money to make movies, the government can help poor and low-income families who barely have money to have normal meals.
Additionally, rulers usually sacrifice many things for their achievements which is not fair. Imagine a poor family who has been forced to send their sons to the army to fight against their enemy. There is no actual nation's achievement when many families lose their sons to defend the country. On the other hand, many families may lose their jobs and money during war which is not fair. Moreover, rulers can try other ways such as talking to solve disagreements between countries. A war is not a good way for problems' solution because it costs a lot.
On the contrary, scientists' achievements are indication of a nation's welfare; however, the goal should be toward people's comfort. For example, all expensive researches to innovate Covid vaccine and to offer free vaccine to prevent people's death are an indication of a nation greatness that can be a good improvement for any country. On the other hand, unnecessary researches that are not beneficial for general welfare should not be considered good projects. Imagine a scientist who is having an expensive scientific project to produce a chemical weapon against enemies. As a result, people might even get hurt during a weapon test.
Greatness definition can be different for everyone, but an actual improvement in any country depends on how a government make a society a comfortable environment for everyone. There are many ways to measure a country's greatness such as scientists, artists, or rulers’ achievements. However, there is no actual happiness when general people are poor.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 210, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
... is the most important way to measure a nations greatness. There is no point of makin...
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Line 2, column 519, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...barely have money to have normal meals. Additionally, rulers usually sacrifice m...
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Line 3, column 216, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...against their enemy. There is no actual nations achievement when many families lose the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, for example, such as, as a result, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 33.0505617978 33% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 58.6224719101 63% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1912.0 2235.4752809 86% => OK
No of words: 377.0 442.535393258 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07161803714 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7925832238 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488063660477 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 603.0 704.065955056 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.1711047391 60.3974514979 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.0476190476 118.986275619 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9523809524 23.4991977007 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38095238095 5.21951772744 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 5.13820224719 214% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16953969245 0.243740707755 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0563664106409 0.0831039109588 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461741200486 0.0758088955206 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102855752185 0.150359130593 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413584675948 0.0667264976115 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 100.480337079 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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