Nowadays some countries encourage people to buy more and more products, which is good for economy. While others believe it is bad for the society.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
These days, some nations tend to urge their citizens to make more and more purchases. While I agree that this trend will benefit these countries’ economy to some extent, I still believe that it will cause detrimental effects on the society.
On the one hand, people’s consuming more and more products may be advantageous for the development of a country. It is because when people’s demands for consumer goods increase, manufacturers have to generate more products to meet these demands and thus, gaining back more profits. This may considerably contribute to the average revenue of a country through such sources as business taxes.
On the other hand, I believe that encouraging people to purchase more will create a throw-away society, which may lead to unpredicted problems for people’s life. To be specific, following the shopping trend, people may waste their money on unecessary things just because they want to keep up with the latest trends and show off to other people. For example, there are those who are willing to buy the latest version of iPhone and the newest bag model of Channel, which are considered the implications of wealth and success, even though their current phones and bags are still new and usable. As a consequence, the public may not hesitate to order prohibitive products by using credit card without being fully aware of its potential dangers. This may result in themselves falling into unpredictable troubles, including heavy debts.
To conclude, while pushing people to buy more goods may contribute to a country’s economic developments, I believe that this trend will gradually form a consumer society, where people willingly pour their savings into not really necessary things.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, really, so, still, thus, while, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1450.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21582733813 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75124130343 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604316546763 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.2084626339 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.818181818 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2727272727 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.90909090909 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31018322832 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118571500519 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0882225560495 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193393020508 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361569542687 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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