Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In recent years, a number of trend and style has been changed that makes impact on old values. A section of the society thought that to continue traditions to future, songs, and poems are the best way to preserve it. I partially support to this statement believe that other things also make significant contribution to it.
Music significantly contribute to save cultures and other old things. Many writers wrote about numerous line about historic values that remind us about centuries old culture. A benefit of this people are much interested to listen music in their leisure instead to read book and listen lectures. For example, number of songs that had been written in years ago according to their life style. In these songs writer mention travelling sources and what kind of tradition about gifts, Food and about their free time activities. Although, music transfers a limited data and knowledge about history while there are some other ways to transfer essential things.
To successfully store values and cultures we need some ways like books, videos and some model of culture. Moreover, books store data about dates and other number and videos graphically preserve movement of humen and in future people can visualise about history. In addition, sculpture of things that would save the size of creature. For instance if bones are preserved in mud and under water then who we can describe about old ages.
In conclusion, music is way to save and move values while it is enough to preserve it, although, their are some other ways which is essential for preservation of culture.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'songs'' or 'song's'?
Suggestion: songs'; song's
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Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
... it is enough to preserve it, although, their are some other ways which is essential ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, then, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1328.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0303030303 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49388600407 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57196969697 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.5418049592 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.8571428571 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8571428571 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135396137645 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0478178500319 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443340138884 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0838121112134 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0191703610937 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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