Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people opine that adolescents need to do volunteer work in their free time as such actions are beneficial not only to the teenagers but also to the society. From my perspective, I do not totally agree with this statement. I believe that teenagers should be rewarded for their time and efforts.
On the one hand, participating in volunteer work can bring several benefits to the youngsters, as well as the community. First and foremost, doing unpaid work is an opportunity for teenagers to improve their social skills, which are extremely useful for them in the future. Young people can learn new things and experience all aspects of the world. Thus, they can be more responsible and mature. Moreover, it is believed that this form of activity can bring economic growth. If adolescents contribute to the unpaid work, that society will be provided with abundant labor resources can help the government save a gigantic amount of money.
On the other hand, I believe that people should not obligate teenagers to take part in non-profit occupations. Youngsters nowadays are already under great pressure to study, their teachers expect them to do homework and exams every day. Therefore, when young people have some free time, parents should encourage them to do what they like to overcome the stress. Furthermore, people sometimes take unfair advantage of youngsters’ contribution. For example, when teenagers do the jobs without salary, some organisations tend to hire them instead of the experienced workers in order to reduce the expenditure on paying employees.
In conclusion, teenagers should be encouraged to do unpaid work during their leisure time. However, it is necessary to reward the youngsters for their contribution to society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1475.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24911032028 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85649653372 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583629893238 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.3380779271 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.1875 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5625 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.625 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.457318517756 0.244688304435 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139969304581 0.084324248473 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0901828316124 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.29087053411 0.151304729494 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624733640367 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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