If the government wants to invest in the following three areas, what do you think is the most worthwhile? land exploration, education, and healthcare.
With the pandemic looming over the world since the end of 2019, it appears to be necessary to invest in healthcare more than the government used to do to provide a safe environment for the majority of citizens to return to their normal routines. Therefore, even if investing in land exploration or education has its merits, it is better to put healthcare as a top priority under this circumstance, which can be elaborated for the following reasons.
First and foremost, healthcare used to be a topic usually only concerned by experts but now most people are not only aware of it but also try their best to keep themselves healthy enough to ensure their immune system functions in a good condition to fight against COVI-19, along with vaccines. It is obvious that if the government invests more money in healthcare, more vaccines can be produced and distributed to citizens, giving our society a better chance to fight against the virus in general.
Meanwhile, as we all know that because of the pandemic, many schools have to delay their schedule for the beginning of a new semester, not to mention that online courses are almost available from elementary school to college. To maintain the operation of these institutions, the government needs to offer safe access for students to study first before considering any further development of education.
Likewise, land exploration is no longer an option under this circumstance, given that there will not have any potential customers for the new apartments, hotels, or parks if health issues are not cleared in the first place. With that being said, healthcare is the only suitable investment for this standpoint if the government analyzes it in a long term.
To sum up, only when the government prioritizes the investment of healthcare can the afraid of the unprecedented future of our society be reduced under the threat of a pandemic.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: First
...laborated for the following reasons. first and foremost, healthcare used to be a t...
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Line 3, column 93, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...ually only concerned by experts but now most of people not only aware of it but also try their...
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Line 3, column 293, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...t against COVI-19, along with vaccines. it is obvious that if the government inves...
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Line 5, column 265, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this institution' or 'these institutions'?
Suggestion: this institution; these institutions
.... In order to support the operation of these institution, the government needs to offer a safe a...
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Line 5, column 314, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'safe access'.
Suggestion: safe access
...titution, the government needs to offer a safe access for students to study first before cons...
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Line 9, column 10, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , only
...nalyzes it in a long term. To sum up,only when the government prioritizes the inv...
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Line 9, column 94, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...vestment of healthcare can the afraid of the unprecedented future of our society ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, likewise, so, therefore, while, in general, to sum up, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.0752688172 248% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1577.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 315.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00634920635 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82920022227 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574603174603 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.6003584229 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.1344086022 174% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.1191724914 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 175.222222222 100.406767564 175% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.0 20.6045352989 170% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5555555556 5.45110844103 194% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176160901822 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0749662566359 0.076458572812 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527503216252 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0972705498758 0.150856017488 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605016676655 0.0645574589148 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.7 11.7677419355 167% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.95 58.1214874552 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 10.1575268817 166% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.37 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.01818996416 116% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 10.002688172 190% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.0537634409 159% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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