Most people have forgotten the meaning behind traditional or religious festivals;
during festival periods, people nowadays only want to enjoy themselves.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
A large number of individuals have lost touch with the true meaning of festivals, and that they only wish to experience joy during these festival periods. I totally agree with this statement.
Firstly, in most of the festivals, people are allowed to get days off which means that they have time to go on a vacation with family and friends or even stay at home by themself. In other words, they could do whatever they want to do as long as these activities entertain them, therefore honoring the festivals' deeper significance is no longer their priority. For example, independence day in Vietnam, some people just completely forget about the underlying meaning of this holiday, which is the birth of the country besides knowing only the name of the festival and awarening that they have two days off.
Secondly, nowadays, most people just want to watch or read about things that are entertaining and cost little time, rather than doing research about the long history of the festival. At the same time, the appearance of social networks containing short entertaining contents has covered nearly the entire world. For instance, a under twenty seconds dancing video on Tiktok is worth watching, compared to an hour long video about the true meaning of independence day - according to TuoiTre online news.
In conclusion, most people have forgotten the underlying meaning of festivals due to the fact that they want to enjoy themself and social networks play a part in it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: Many; Numerous
A large number of individuals have lost touch with the tr...
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Line 11, column 327, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...nearly the entire world. For instance, a under twenty seconds dancing video on T...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1255.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10162601626 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60096802499 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60162601626 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 373.5 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.5463339225 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.444444444 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3333333333 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.1111111111 7.06120827912 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283226114908 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120741421993 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0756618425513 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190347609307 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0734485176272 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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