Writing an essay compare or contrasting living in a dormitory and living with your family

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Writing an essay compare or contrasting living in a dormitory and living with your family.

There are many differences and similarities point of view between living in a dormitory and living with your family. Depending on individual, people will have distinct opinions. The purpose of this essay is to make opinion become more clearly.

The first different between living in a dormitory and living with family is living condition. Home is the most comfortable space to live mentally and physically. Moreover, living with your family make you feel more security and home where members of family will help you less stress. When you have trouble, you can share with your family and they might suggest some solutions to you that you can resolve it. In the contrast, the space of the dormitory quite narrow and suffocated so it make you feel more tension when you have to face with problem. You will time- consuming for housework such as: washing, cleaning, taking out the rubbish, etc. On the other hand, you might encounter some difficult situations or loneliness.

In addition, independence is the one of differences. Living away from home is living by your own destiny. You can do anything what you want and do not need to care too much about family’s rules. Clearly, you will have a chance to get more experiences from outside. You will learn that how to responsible with yourself. Unlike living in a dorm, living in family always keeps you from a mess of the life so that you will be passive in difficult tasks. You also cannot come home late if your parents not allow. You will be depended on other people who usually protect you from challenges.

Last but not least, finance is one of differences between living in a dormitory and living with family. People who live away from home have to be worry about living cost; thus, people live at home with family will not pay bills for public utilities, renting, food, etc. You can save money to go shopping luxurious clothes or traveling. Especially, if you are student who live in the dormitory, you will have to build up plan to do housework, make a meal, tidy up, etc. On the contrary, when you live at home, you need to responsible for some household chores and you have to help your mom if she asks you.

In conclusion, there are some major differences between living in a dormitory and living with family. If you want to move out, you should carefully consider the living conditions, independence and finance before deciding live away from home.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 487, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
Suggestion: makes
...itory quite narrow and suffocated so it make you feel more tension when you have to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, thus, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the contrary, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 41.998997996 157% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2004.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 419.0 315.596192385 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78281622912 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5315120289 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.470167064439 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 641.7 506.74238477 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.9323184729 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.16 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.76 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292782174471 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121797517647 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13797175176 0.0667982634062 207% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.242047964346 0.151304729494 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0706016965641 0.056905535591 124% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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