There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music?
Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music
that is heard everywhere nowadays?
Music is the heart of human societies since the dawn of civilization. Music is becoming part of our daily routine, culture, and an irreplaceable treatment. As the developing of human beings, the raising question is that the classic styles of music should be focussed more than the commercial one. When it comes to me, I definitely advocate this school of thought based on some following reasons.
In the first place, the captivation of music in human life is irresistible, regardless of old, age, gender, social status. First, people, including me, find it difficult to not listen to that soft, ear-catching songs in our spare time. No matter what kind of music individuals pursue, people now can enjoy a wide range of songs from folk music to rock performances. Second, music is a vital part of any cultural activities and holidays, making them become representative of the culture of a certain nation or area. For example, Northern Europe is renowned for Rock music while Asia is known for its folk songs. Finally, having hectic schedules and being isolated, modern citizens hardly live a normal life without the cure from music.
In the second place, Not only is music significant, but traditional music also brings history and moral merit. Needless to say, the presence of music is as long as the history of human beings, which makes folk songs more important than the international music that bears little meaning. Besides, recent music is only used for recreation, and hardly does it appear on cultural performances or rituals. Although commercial music attracts the youths, the mature individuals, the majority part of the population, prefer traditional music. As time goes by, people will have lots of experience and sufferings, leaving only those meaningful folk songs that can reach their soul. For example, rather than listening to pop music like I was in university, I spend more time listening to Vietnamese folk songs these days.
All in all, if all factors are contemplated, people can be easy to reach a conclusion is that music is necessary for every facet of human life, and that people should keep their interest in traditional music based on its infinite value.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, if, second, so, while, for example, kind of, in the first place, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1823.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03591160221 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74056122054 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574585635359 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6063885362 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.235294118 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2941176471 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05882352941 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.361703332653 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131436766648 0.084324248473 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0839659453611 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227937353755 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0709612766318 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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