Some people believe that school children should not be given homework be their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Millions of children are struggling with their homework these days. Many people argue that school assignment is not necessary for the youngs while the rests think that homework is a key factor in children’s educational path. Personally, I would advocate the latter opinion by discussing both views of this issue.
On one hand, the burden of doing homework makes the young generation have no time to enjoy life and develop social skills. In other words, nowadays, children have to spend the majority of their time in study, including studying at school and doing lots of teacher’s assignments afterward, making/leaving them difficult to find time for outside activities as well as communication with other people. Many research has shown that the young generation is suffering severe stress, isolation, mental disorders due to the lack of social interaction. Although those drawbacks of giving homework to children, there are more positive effects that make it a good educational method.
On other hand, practicing homework help students build a solid background and behavior/ an independent study habit. In fact, the learning process involves a lot of theories that make children difficult to grasp without practicing by doing school assignments. Moreover, by doing the teacher’s requirements, the youngs have a chance to develop task-solving/ problem-solving skills, including time management, healthy behavior, and discipline. As a result, children will progress both academically and professionally by doing what tasks are given by their teachers. For example, if I have not been doing tons of exercise related to English speaking and writing, I hardly speak and write even a word in the IELTS examination.
In conclusion, the statement that teachers’ tasks are not vital for children’s educational progress is completely wrong as it brings more positive effects in terms of building lifelong success for young people. In the future, the combination of study and practice is the fundamental ground when creating any curriculum all over the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1746.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47335423197 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04248730519 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58934169279 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7310334519 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.714285714 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7857142857 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64285714286 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24656944704 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0877724992631 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664395684899 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158315848656 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0885961283836 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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