Nowadays, celebrities increasingly have the status of role models, in particular for younger people. Do you see this as a positive or negative development?
So far, celebrities are the people that can be seen as an inspiration to civilians in every aspect of their life. Moreover, with young generations these days, celebrities are considered as role models, thus, have a significant contribution in their daily life choices and their social reputation development. In this essay, I will approached with the two alternative sides of this debatable topic and given my own consideration.
Under one circumstance, it is obvious that celebrities frequently promote themselves as a group with the desire to use their given attention by mass media along with their passion and skilled in some certain industries such as music, cinematography, modelling to inspire and be everyone else motivation. For example, Lady Gaga is an American famous singer, songwriter and actress, who was known for her several popular songs and starring in films like House of Gucci and American Horror Story. In addition, she was also well-known for her positive view towards the LGBTQ+ community and right mindset on several other heated debates amongst the society. By that, she has gained the respect and admiration from the public as well as any other colleagues.
On the other side of the coin, in the present time, a social media platform called TikTok has been gaining numberous attention from the youngsters due to its unprecedented concept and amusing contents. However, a majority of people have stated that famous users on this platform appear to have many inappropriate contents and have lifestyle that could be a bad influence for other users. For instance, the account of The Hype House, from a TV show that combined a group of TikTok influencers together and show the fans how their everyday life like. But, despite the fact that nowadays Corona Virus situation is seems to be more severe than ever, those TikTokers from The Hype House was accused for held a party in the middle of a pandemic, where people are dying everyday.
To make a long story short, in my opinion, celebrities are always be role models to the society and when a celebrity is appears to be a bad influence, they should know to filter out those people and do not let them ruin one’s life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1833.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98097826087 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75060006986 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60597826087 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 585.9 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.8307370206 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.75 106.682146367 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.6666666667 20.7667163134 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185754095286 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0619795571437 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458231889094 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11020415778 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0241380294092 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.2 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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